Critique wanted Nice place near Seaford

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Jack

Jack

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I had a trip to very small town located by the sea called Seaford. I was in love with stunning places there. Worth visiting !

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Andy Smith

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A nice place indeed jack. The cliffs are amazing.
I find your image is slightly let down by the foreground being a bit underwhelming compared to those cliffs.
The bench is great, and in my opinion could have been used as a wonderful foreground subject, to lead the eye across to the cliffs, but it needs to be closer to the front of the frame. Or the fence line on the left could have been used as a great foreground subject also, leading the eyes to the distant cliffs.
The sky is nice, the ocean is nice, the cliffs are great, the people walking around are nice, the lighthouse is a nice horizon break that catches the eye, I just find the large expanse of empty grass in the foreground to be lacking interest a bit.
 
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Jack

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Andy Smith said:
A nice place indeed jack. The cliffs are amazing.
I find your image is slightly let down by the foreground being a bit underwhelming compared to those cliffs.
The bench is great, and in my opinion could have been used as a wonderful foreground subject, to lead the eye across to the cliffs, but it needs to be closer to the front of the frame. Or the fence line on the left could have been used as a great foreground subject also, leading the eyes to the distant cliffs.
The sky is nice, the ocean is nice, the cliffs are great, the people walking around are nice, the lighthouse is a nice horizon break that catches the eye, I just find the large expanse of empty grass in the foreground to be lacking interest a bit.
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I have other images taken from this spot. I think with a bench it give unique composition. After your message, I think you right, I have in the frame too much ground and grass.


I will check other pictures and can upload here again.
 
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