Critique wanted Laguna Beach, CA

• Aug 19, 2022

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Mark Pinchuk

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Snapped a photo while out at the beach with the family, early morning.

 

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• Aug 20, 2022

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Morexp57

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I really like the mysteriously calm atmosphere of this landscape.

I would have liked to see the same composition but with more foreground or without it. Because I find the plants in the foreground a bit distracting the way they are framed.

 

• Aug 21, 2022

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Andy Smith

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Wonderful image with lots of atmosphere. The colours are lovely but I agree with Morexp57, that the foreground plants are a little distracting because they are cut off too short i think.

 

• Aug 21, 2022

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Mark Pinchuk

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Morexp57 said:

I really like the mysteriously calm atmosphere of this landscape.

I would have liked to see the same composition but with more foreground or without it. Because I find the plants in the foreground a bit distracting the way they are framed.

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Thank you for the input. I might retake the photo when I’m back in the location. Possibly different weather as well.

 

• Aug 21, 2022

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Mark Pinchuk

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Andy Smith said:

Wonderful image with lots of atmosphere. The colours are lovely but I agree with Morexp57, that the foreground plants are a little distracting because they are cut off too short i think.

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I see. I covered them with my fingers, it would have looked much better that way.