Critique wanted Les Diablerets

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Morexp57

Morexp57

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View on the Diablerets massif, in the canton of Vaud in Switzerland. Picture taken on the morning of October 25, 2021, around 9:30 am.

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Leraymurat

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Bel endroit ! je trouve juste que le versant ombragé manque un peu de details surtout vers le bas. Un traitement local des zones sombres aurait peut être permis d'en augmenter légèrement la luminosité, donc la lisibilité.
 
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Leraymurat said:
Bel endroit ! je trouve juste que le versant ombragé manque un peu de details surtout vers le bas. Un traitement local des zones sombres aurait peut être permis d'en augmenter légèrement la luminosité, donc la lisibilité.
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Tu as entièrement raison. J'ai fait une nouvelle version. Je mets aussi une traduction en anglais pour que les non francophone puisse comprendre.

L Leraymurat said:
Nice place! I just find that the shaded side lacks a bit of details especially towards the bottom. A local treatment of the dark areas would have perhaps allowed to increase slightly the luminosity, thus the readability.

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You are absolutely right. I made a new version. I also put a translation in English so that the non French speakers can understand.

This also shows that you should not delete RAW files because it is always possible to improve the processing of a photo.

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Leraymurat

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Morexp57 said:
Tu as entièrement raison. J'ai fait une nouvelle version. Je mets aussi une traduction en anglais pour que les non francophone puisse comprendre.

L Leraymurat said:
Nice place! I just find that the shaded side lacks a bit of details especially towards the bottom. A local treatment of the dark areas would have perhaps allowed to increase slightly the luminosity, thus the readability.

And I answered:
You are absolutely right. I made a new version. I also put a translation in English so that the non French speakers can understand.

This also shows that you should not delete RAW files because it is always possible to improve the processing of a photo.

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Sorry for the untranslated message...

I like the new version much more!
 
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Oh, that new version really lifted compared to the first one! I would even go further with the dodge/burn tool to reveal those highlights in the trees in the lower part.
 
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Leraymurat

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MartinF said:
Oh, that new version really lifted compared to the first one! I would even go further with the dodge/burn tool to reveal those highlights in the trees in the lower part.
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Here is a perfect version. How to process your photos is really part of the photographer's job and especially that you should never get rid of your RAW! Well done!
 
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