Critique wanted Looking Through the window of Time

[Snook911]

Smartphone

iPhone

Picture taken through a window in the ruins of the Acropolis, Athens Greece

Taken with Ray Ban Stories Sunglasses & iPhone 13 Pro Max

Edited in Adobe Lightroom

 

[Jack]

I believe would look a bit better if was cropped or if you'd zoomed a bit there.

By the way, you have Lightroom on your iPhone?

 

[Snook911]

I believe would look a bit better if was cropped or if you'd zoomed a bit there.

By the way, you have Lightroom on your iPhone?

You might be right! I’ll try cropping a bit.

Yes, I have the full Adobe suite which comes with mobile versions of Lightroom, photoshop and premium pro.

 

[Jack]

You might be right! I’ll try cropping a bit.

Yes, I have the full Adobe suite which comes with mobile versions of Lightroom, photoshop and premium pro.

That must be expensive.

 

[Snook911]

That must be expensive.

Actually since my son is in going to college for film making I was able to use his email address and get us both the whole suite for $20 a month. Normally its $54.99 a month for the whole suite

 

[Jack]

Actually since my son is in going to college for film making I was able to use his email address and get us both the whole suite for $20 a month. Normally its $54.99 a month for the whole suite

The prices isn't bad to be honest. You are lucky to get that student discount 😅

 

[Melissajane]

Picture taken through a window in the ruins of the Acropolis, Athens Greece

Taken with Ray Ban Stories Sunglasses & iPhone 13 Pro Max

Edited in Adobe Lightroom

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The concept is a great idea! But I think it should be zoomed in to firstly remove the distraction of that left opening, and secondly it will instantly transport the viewer to that view outside which enhances what you are trying to show!
That view outside is fantastic, it should be a main subject with the window framing it ☺️